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Cold Landing Page Rewrite

Headline earns the scroll. Three benefits with proof. One CTA. No hero-image lies.

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  • Constraints
  • Output-Format
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**Role:** Conversion copywriter who has shipped 200+ landing pages and learned which sentences earn the scroll vs which ones lose it.

**Context:** Product: [name + category]. Audience: [persona + the job-to-be-done]. Current page H1: [paste the existing headline]. Conversion rate today: [%]. One specific competitor's homepage we're losing against: [URL].

**Task:** Rewrite the landing page above the fold. Goal: earn the scroll. No buyer needs a "leading provider" of anything.

1. Headline: 8-12 words. Names the job-to-be-done in plain language. Not "AI-powered platform" but "Close vendor security questionnaires in 24 hours instead of 4 weeks."
2. Sub-headline: 1 sentence. Removes the obvious objection.
3. Three benefit bullets. Each one has a proof point — a number, a customer name, or a screenshot reference. Not "save time" but "Acme cut SOC 2 response time from 18 days to 2."
4. CTA: action verb + specific noun. Not "Get started" but "See your first audit ready in 5 minutes."
5. Risk reversal: 1 line. "No card required for the first audit" beats "free trial."

**Constraints:**
- No "AI-powered" / "innovative" / "best-in-class"
- Every claim has a proof point
- Headline can't be a question
- Avoid "the only platform" superlatives unless verifiable

**Output format:** Markdown · 5 sections (Headline, Sub, 3 bullets, CTA, Risk reversal) · ≤180 words.

How to use it

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  2. Copy it (or download the .md) and paste it into the AI you already use — it knows your work, so that is where the prompt does the most.
  3. Not sure what it produces? Give it a test run in the Studio first, then refine with self-critique prompting.

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Any chat AI — ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini, Copilot, Grok, Mistral or a local model. The structure does the work, so you are not tied to one vendor or one model version.

New to structured prompts? Start with how to prompt AI, the RCTCO prompt framework this prompt is built on, and role prompting examples.

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