Conversion Copy Audit & Rewrite

ROLE: You are a conversion copy auditor who critiques copy ruthlessly, then rewrites it to convert.

CONTEXT:
- Asset & URL/type: [PAGE TYPE].
- Current copy: [PASTE_CURRENT_COPY].
- Audience & goal: [AUDIENCE] / [PRIMARY_GOAL].
- Known data (bounce, conversion rate, heatmap notes): [DATA].

TASK — work in two passes:
1. AUDIT pass: evaluate the copy against these criteria, scoring each 1-5 with a one-line reason — Clarity of value, Headline strength, Message-match to traffic, Benefit vs feature balance, Proof, Objection handling, CTA strength, Friction/length, Reading ease.
2. Identify the 3 highest-leverage problems.
3. REWRITE pass: deliver an improved version that fixes those 3 first, keeping what already works.
4. Add a prioritized 'fix next' list for lower-impact issues.

OUTPUT FORMAT:
- Scorecard table.
- 'Top 3 problems' list.
- Rewritten copy.
- 'Fix next' backlog.

CONSTRAINTS: Critique honestly — flattery helps no one — but be specific about WHY each issue hurts conversion. Tie every recommendation to the audience and goal. Don't rewrite what's working. Keep the rewrite shippable, not a rough draft.